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debetesse ([personal profile] debetesse) wrote2005-09-30 11:24 pm

I just wrote a spoily drabble. Huh

Behind the door

Her brother is dying living saving Kaylee fixing the family broken can’t be fixed and which is real or she’s afraid of or he is or Inara is.

She fights to save him or and Zoe doesn’t want saving and the Captain would die to make them hear her win the war he’s still fighting not fighting anymore.

They’re telling her everything they’ll do to her did to them all torn Hawaiian shirt vestigial reference to Earth That Was paradise

The symbol says they—quiet now—won’t get to go Book believed in forgiveness she doesn't comprehend.


I get the feeling I'll be picking at this one for a while. It's not quite there.